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Get professional feedback that identifies what’s working and what’s not before your next draft or your first day on set.
Pen Pal Success Story
From Development Notes to NAACP Image Award Winner.
“I used TPP’s services when I started out writing features in 2021, and the script I received some good marks to has now been produced and is starring some amazing talent (Lil’ Rel Howery, Tabitha Brown). I credit TPP’s services, along with other outside training, that helped jumpstart my confidence in my journey as a writer.”
“TPP’s services helped jumpstart my confidence in my journey as a writer.”
Unexpected Christmas
3 NAACP Image Award Nominations
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“I used TPP’s services when I started out writing features in 2021, and the script I received some good marks to has now been produced and is starring some amazing talent (Lil’ Rel Howery, Tabitha Brown). I credit TPP’s services, along with other outside training, that helped jumpstart my confidence in my journey as a writer.”
YOUR DEVELOPMENT TEAM.
WITHOUT THE STUDIO.
Development Notes is our signature service, and here’s why:
Someone lied to you about needing script coverage, and TPP is on a mission to correct that mistake.
Script Coverage and Development Notes are not the same thing —and knowing the difference could save your project. Read this before you spend another dollar→
And while we’re on the subject, let’s bust a few more myths.
Development isn’t just a studio thing, it doesn’t have to be expensive, and it isn’t about mandating changes to your story.
Independent filmmakers need development, too.
Go ahead and add it to your budget.
NOW THAT THE EXCUSES ARE OUT OF THE WAY…
HERE’S HOW IT WORKS
Submit Your Script: All writers are assigned their own personal development partner. We call them Story Experts.
Review Your Notes: Learn what’s working, what isn’t, and where to focus your rewrite. Need clarity or want to talk strategy? Schedule a Story Jam with your Story Expert.
Revise. Assess. Repeat as Needed: Take time to address the feedback, then submit your revised draft for another round of notes at a discounted rate. Every script is different. Your story determines how many rounds it needs.
WHO NEEDS DEVELOPMENT?
Independent Filmmakers
Preparing to shoot your project?
Don't waste money shooting a script that isn't ready.
Pitch-Ready Writers
Preparing to take your script out?
Don't lose opportunities because the script doesn't deliver on the pitch.
Emerging Screenwriters
Finished your script?
Don't waste time on endless rewrites.
YOU
Not sure where you fit?
If you're writing a screenplay, script feedback helps you move forward.
WE KNOW WHAT YOU'RE THINKING...
I don't want anyone changing my story.
It's your story. We help you strengthen your vision, not replace it with ours.
I can't afford professional script development.
You don't need a studio budget to access studio-level development expertise. Plus, pay-later options are available.
I don't have time for script development.
Fixing story problems on the page takes less time than fixing them during production—or after. Get your notes in two weeks, with one-week expedited service available.
I'm afraid they'll tear my script apart.
Our notes are constructive, actionable, and designed to help you move forward—not discourage you.
What if I don't agree with the feedback?
You're not paying for someone to tell you what to write. You're investing in an experienced perspective so you can make informed creative decisions.
SUBMIT YOUR SCRIPT FOR DEVELOPMENT NOTES
You'll Receive
Detailed page-by-page notes on:
- Story
- Structure
- Character
- Areas of Confusion
Plus
- Overall summary of areas of development
- Final recommendation: Pass / Needs Development / Consider
- Clear next steps
What To Expect
- Turnaround: 14 business days
- Additional pages: $4/pg.
- Pay Later Available
Continue Your Development
- Logline Review
- Story Jam
- Rewrite Package
- Discount on future drafts
SELECT YOUR SCRIPT FORMAT:
SHORTS NEED LOVE, TOO.
Many writers and independent filmmakers sharpen their craft by shooting a short. Short scripts move fast, which means every moment has to count. If you're unsure whether your story is clear, your ending lands, or your idea is strong enough to produce, talk it through with a Story Expert before pre-production.
You'll Receive
- A 1-hour live consultation
- Feedback on story, structure, and character
- Identification of plot holes and areas of confusion
- Guidance on making your script production-ready
- Answers to your screenwriting and production questions
- Clear next steps
What To Expect
- Starting at $150
- Choose your Story Expert
- Submit your script for advance review (up to 15 pages)
- Additional pages: $4/page
- Verbal feedback only. No written notes.
MEET YOUR DEVELOPMENT TEAM
you’ve got questions.
we’ve got answers.
Browse our FAQs — or chat 1:1 with a Story Expert to get your questions answered.
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For Features and TV Scripts:
Select the correct format in the pricing table.
Purchase the service via the checkout page.
Pen Pals have the option to Add-On a Logline Review and a Notes Call.
After payment, Pen Pals will be directed to submit their script.
If a Logline Review was purchased, add your Logline in the dedicated form field for review.
For Shorts:
Select Schedule Story Jam in the Shorts section.
Schedule your call.
Upon submitting payment, Pen Pals will be directed to submit their script.
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Script recommendations are evaluations that help writers understand the level of development their script requires
to meet industry standards and enhance its overall quality.PASS: The story is either unclear, has weak structure, needs more complex character work or is lacking proofreading and industry-standard formatting.
NEEDS DEVELOPMENT: The screenplay is working in most areas but not executing at its highest potential. The script will be in great shape if the writer addresses the action items disclosed in the feedback.
CONSIDER: The story is clear, the structure is strong, the characters are 3-dimensional, and the proofreading and formatting is professional and up to industry standard.
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Need help applying your notes?
You can upgrade to a Rewrite Package—six weeks of 1:1, two-hour sessions with your Story Expert to implement the notes and elevate your draft into a portfolio-ready script.Rewrite Packages are available on a case-by-case basis, depending on availability.
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The Story Notes service is designed for Pen Pals who have revised their script based on Development Notes from their assigned Story Expert. Your Story Expert will monitor and guide your progress, ensuring your script is polished and refined.
The Story Notes service includes:Detailed, page-by-page Story Notes
Overall summary of your areas of development and next steps
The Story Notes service does not include:Proofreading + Formatting Notes
Logline Review
Finished your revised draft? Submit for Story Notes here.
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Story Experts are assigned unless specifically requested. You'll continue working with the same Story Expert on future services to ensure consistency and track your progress from draft to draft. This helps avoid conflicting feedback and provides a more focused path toward a polished script.
If a new Story Expert is ever assigned, they’ll review the original feedback to stay aligned with your journey—but they will not read your original submission. If you prefer to start fresh with a new Story Expert, you can resubmit your script as a new project by selecting the appropriate format from the pricing table.
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No worries. We’ve got you at every step in your screenwriting journey.
If you find yourself needing additional support addressing your notes, you can work 1: 1 with your personal Story Expert through a Rewrite Package. The package includes 6 weeks of 2-hour sessions designed to refine your script into a polished sample ready for your professional writing portfolio.
Rewrite packages are available on a case-by-case basis and at Story Expert availability.
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If your script is longer than the standard page count, please Add-On the number additional pages during checkout at $4/page. Increase the quantity by the number of additional pages.
Standard Page Counts:
Shorts (20 pages)
1/2hr TV (30 pages)
1hr TV ( 60 pages)
Feature (75-120 pages)
YOUR STORY DESERVES TO MAKE IT TO THE SCREEN.
The pros don’t skip development. Neither should you.