Script analysis: Andy on PIECES OF HER on Netflix is sooo naive that she comes across as stupid.
Though her arc will be to find her confidence and place in life through this journey, I don't want to follow it. She keeps making very, very dumb decisions. I'd much rather this be her mom's story.
It's far too obvious when a novel is adapted into a screenplay these days.
Going to try to keep watching, but I'm over her.
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