The Professional Pen
THE PROFESSIONAL PEN
  • LOGIN/register
  • HOME
  • WHERE DO I START?
  • LEARN
    • COURSES
    • MASTER CLASSES
    • WORKBOOKS
  • DEVELOPMENT NOTES
  • CONSULTATIONS
  • COMMUNITY
  • PROGRAMS
    • MENTORSHIP
    • SCRIPT COMPETITION
    • EXECUTIVE TRAINING PROGRAM
  • ABOUT

VIP Script Review

faq's

What's included in the VIP Script Review?
The VIP Script Review is designed for Pen Pals who are working towards understanding the craft of screenwriting and seeking guidance in their process. Your Story Expert will read thirty (30) pages of your script and give an overall summary of your areas of development and next steps to reach your goals.
Do I have to submit the first 30 pages of my script?
We recommend submitting the first 30 pages of your script to provide your Story Expert with necessary context. If you have previously worked with your Story Expert on this story, you may be allowed to submit a different set of 30 pages. Please consult with your Story Expert prior to purchasing. Decisions regarding page submissions are made at the discretion of your Story Expert on an individual basis.
I'd like to submit more than 30 pages.

The VIP Script Review is tailored to review thirty pages of a script. We recommend adhering to this guideline for submissions. Should your script exceed thirty pages, additional pages can be purchased at $4 each using this link.

​For feedback on your entire script, please submit it for Development Notes here.
Is there a discount on subsequent submissions of revised pages?
This service, available at a discounted rate, is exclusively for Academy Pen Pals. ​While subsequent VIP Reviews do not offer discounts, you can submit your script as many times as you like. Once you've revised your full script based on Development Notes, you can resubmit it for Story Notes at a discounted rate. Your Story Expert will provide a submission link for Story Notes in the 'Next Steps' section of your Development Notes.
What if I need additional 1:1 help?
Need help with your notes? Work one-on-one with your personal Story Expert through our Story Jams. Click here for more information.
Finished your screenplay? Congratulations! The next step is to get Development Notes on your full script. For more details, click here.
Turnaround Time: 2 Weeks
* Additional pages are $4/pg

Screenplay Formats

SHORT

(UP TO 20 PAGES)

A screenplay intended to be produced as an original motion picture with a running time less than a feature film. This includes trailers and proofs of concepts.

TELEVISION

(UP TO 60 PAGES)

A script intended for television, ie. a teleplay. This includes pilots, spec episodes of an established series, and web series.

FEATURE

(UP TO 120 PAGES)

A screenplay intended to be produced as an original motion picture.

Television Formats

ONE-HOUR

​Usually dramas told in 4-6 act structure. Think GAME OF THRONES or LAW & ORDER SVU.

1/2HR SINGLE-CAMERA

A series shot like a film on one camera. These shows have more freedom in location than 1/2hr multi-camera shows and are written in 3 acts. Think INSECURE or MODERN FAMILY.

1/2HR MULTI-CAMERA

Set on a soundstage with limited sets, produced in whole like a play in front of a studio audience with multiple cameras and are written in 2 acts. Think MARTIN or FRIENDS.
​ 



LIMITED SERIES


Usually one season of 6-10 episodes, 1-hour episodes. Frequently told as whodunnit stories with closed endings and are usually written in 5 acts. Think LITTLE FIRES EVERYWHERE or CLICK BAIT.
Service Format Selection: TV 1hr
Choose Limited Series as the Genre

MINISERIES


Usually told in 4-6, 2-hour episodes and are usually written in 5 acts. Think WHEN THEY SEE US or ROOTS.
Service Format Selection: TV 1hr + Additional Pages
Choose Miniseries as the Genre

ANTHOLOGY

A series pushed by theme that changes the world and possibly characters each episode or season. Anthologies are usually 1/2hr single-camera or 1 hour shows. Think HOMECOMING or BLACK MIRROR.
​Choose Anthology as the Genre

TV MOVIE

A narrative piece written in 9-Act structure. Think Lifetime and Hallmark movies. 
​Service Format Selection: TV 1hr + Additional Pages
Choose TV Movie as the Genre

What ARe
SCRIPT RECOMMENDATIONS?

Script recommendations are evaluations that help writers understand the level of development their script requires
​to meet industry standards and enhance its overall quality.
Development Notes Pass Recommendation at The Professional Pen

PASS

The first thirty pages are either unclear, has weak structure, needs more complex character work or is lacking proofreading and industry-standard formatting.
Development Notes Needs Development Recommendation at The Professional Pen

NEEDS DEVELOPMENT

The first thirty pages are working in most areas but not executing at its highest potential. The script will be in great shape if the writer addresses the action items disclosed in the feedback.
Development Notes Consider Recommendation at The Professional Pen

CONSIDER

The first thirty pages are clear, the structure is strong, the characters are 3-dimensional, and the proofreading and formatting is professional and up to industry standard.

Script Submission Form

    pen pal info


    SCREENPLAY INFO

    Complete this sentence. My project is in the vein of ______ (insert film or TV show).
    If your submission is longer than 30 pages, click here to purchase additional pages at $4/page.

    UPLOAD SCRIPT

    Max file size: 20MB

    Acknowledgements

    Click here to read TPP's Policies & Agreement.

Submit Script
Find it Here

About

  • About Us
  • Testimonials​
  • Project Formats
  • ​Policies + Agreements​
  • Newsletter Sign-Up
SCHEDULE A CALL

LEARN

  • Screenwriting Courses​ 
  • Update Stripe Account
  • Screenwriting Master Classes
  • Screenwriting Workbooks​​​

COACHING

  • Where do I start?
  • Consultations​
  • Development Notes
  • Submit a Revised Draft
  • Submit a Short Film Script
  • Mentorship​
  • Executive Training Program

#FreeGame

  • $1 Screenwriting Community
  • Blog
  • Screenplay Vault​​​​

Business services

  • Development Consulting
  • Script Coverage Services
  • ​College Speaker Series
READ THE BLOG
Become Best Friends with TPP to enjoy exclusive screenwriting benefits
Gain access to:
  • Exclusive monthly office hours
  • Industry guest speakers
  • Scriptwriting workshops​
BECOME A BFF
READ SCREENPLAYS

Contact Us

Copyright © 2022 The Professional Pen
LogIn
  • HOME
  • WHERE DO I START?
  • LEARN
    • COURSES
    • MASTER CLASSES
    • WORKBOOKS
  • DEVELOPMENT NOTES
  • CONSULTATIONS
  • COMMUNITY
  • PROGRAMS
    • MENTORSHIP
    • SCRIPT COMPETITION
    • EXECUTIVE TRAINING PROGRAM
  • ABOUT
Newsletter Signup