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THE 1st 15
Script Competition

Spring 2025 - COMPETITION WINNER

JD Elliby Winner The Professional Pen's First 15 Script Competition
THE BASEMENT
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J.D. ELLIBY is a drama writer with a sharp eye for fractured families and a soft spot for the strong, complex women who hold them together. When he’s not crafting emotionally charged stories, J.D. is scouting Major League Baseball talent—a career he’s been thriving in for over 25 years. Whether he’s posted up at a ballpark or people-watching in an airport, J.D. has a gift for catching details that make characters feel real. Off the field, he’s all about family time and staying sharp by trading stock options during the offseason

GRAND PRIZE

Ahmadou Seck MACRO Television Studios Credits The Professional Pen First 15 Script Competition
The Professional Pen First 15 Script Competition Winner will meet with Industry Pro Ahmadou Seck for a  General Meeting
Our winner wins a general meeting with AHMADOU SECK, Vice President of Scripted Television at MACRO Television Studios—a division of the multi-platform media company MACRO, that represents the voice and perspectives of Black people, indigenous people and people of color.  He is a co-producer on the upcoming Apple TV+ series Government Cheese starring David Oyelowo.  The innovative executive is passionate about working with diverse creatives to amplify their stories, and in 2023 was named a 40 under 40 honoree for L.A TV Week. His professional journey includes experience in the agency world - Creative Artists Agency (CAA), a television network - Participant Media/Pivot and Overbrook Entertainment. At Overbrook, he was an Associate Producer on the critically acclaimed series Cobra Kai.  Raised by Senegalese parents in Seattle, Ahmadou was taught the importance of being an active member of the community. Since moving to Los Angeles, he has brought that same spirit to the entertainment industry and has held leadership positions with the CAA Multicultural Committee, Colour Entertainment, and a board member for Communities in Schools Los Angeles .Ahmadou has a B.A. from St. Martin’s University.
The Professional Pen's First 15 Script Competition Winner will meet with Shannan E. Johnson for a career strategy session
 ​​Our Winner will also meet with SHANNAN E. JOHNSON, CEO + Head Consultant of The Professional Pen for a career strategy session.
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SPRING 2025 - ToP 10 SCREENWRITERS

Yasmine Simpson
David Dicks
Simba Dibinga
Ryan Cooley
Ted Hall
Lee Collins
Todd Ocvirk
Hiram Watkins
Komo Eto
​Stephen Rowledge
THE CARTERS
THE THROWAWAYS
CASABLANCA
DIVINE
SURVIVOR
THE BONES OF SUNFLOWER
BABYLAN
NEWBORN
PEOPLE, PLEASE!
THE LITTLE COLLECTOR
TV - 1HR
TV - 1HR
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Feature
Feature

TV - 1HR
Feature
Feature

T - 1/2HR
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FINALISTS ARE INVITED...

To a private, live group workshop hosted by TPP's CEO + Head Consultant Shannan E. Johnson.  In this workshop, we'll walk through how to effectively address the notes you received and make sure you’re clear on what’s working, what needs attention, and how to move forward with confidence in your rewrite.

SPRING 2025 - 2nd Round Screenwriters

Ashanti Williams
Ashley Canfield
Benjamin Braziel
Brooke Baltimore
Chantae King
Charlene Little
Chennea Russell
Craig Hlas
David Dicks
Dayna Clark
Dwayne Acklin
Ethan Neal
Fleur Akouete
Harold Abrams
Hiram Watkins
J.D. Elliby
Jackiy Thomas
John Petkovich
Kasey Cormier
Kathleen Gamble
Kaytlin Jackson
KeAmbra Tianez
Kevin Ghee
Kome Eto
Lauryn Cato
Lee Collins
Michelle Jones
Mikell Edwards
Nisha Jackmon
Raymond Williams
Ryan Cooley
Simba Dibinga
Stephen Rowledge
Sylas Bento
Ta Neil Adams
Talvin Critton
Taylor Lee
Ted Hall
Teju Prasad
Terence Poole
Terri Hilliard
Todd Ocvirk
Tona Larkin
Toni Blagmon
Vanessa Brien
Xiomara Moreno
Yasmine Simpson
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REGISTRATION FEE

Early Bird: $39
​Regular: $50

REGISTRATION DEADLINE

Early Bird: March 24th
Regular: April 1st

faq's

What is the 1st 15 Script Competition?
The 1st 15 Script Competition is an opportunity for screenwriters to submit the first 15 pages of their screenplay to key industry professionals, providing vital exposure and feedback. 
Why only 15 pages?
The first 15 pages of a screenplay are critical because they set the tone, introduce the main characters, and establish the story’s core conflict. Industry professionals often decide within these initial pages whether a script has the potential to captivate an audience. By focusing on just the first 15 pages, the 1st 15 Script Competition emphasizes the importance of a strong opening, encouraging writers to refine their skills in crafting compelling beginnings that make a lasting impression.
What do I win?
  • All submissions that qualify for round 2 will receive the following on the 1st 15 pages:
    • Scoresheet of achievement of structural dramatic beats including: Inciting Incident, Goal, Tone, Premise, Characters, Dialogue, Storyline, Formatting, Proofreading 
    • Recommendation: Consider, Needs Development, Pass
    • Conclusion of current status of screenplay and quick advice for next steps in your screenwriting process.
    • Writers will receive their feedback when Finalists are announced.
  • Ten Finalist will attend a LIVE script feedback session.
  • 1 Winner will receive:
    • Script/Career Consultation with Shannan E. Johnson, CEO of The Professional Pen
    •  General Meeting with an Industry Professional
Can I get notes on my full script?
The simple answer is YES.
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All submissions that qualify for round 2 will receive the following on the 1st 15 pages:
  • Scoresheet of achievement of structural dramatic beats including: Inciting Incident, Goal, Tone, Premise, Characters, Dialogue, Storyline, Formatting, Proofreading 
  • Recommendation: Consider, Needs Development, Pass
  • Conclusion of current status of screenplay and quick advice for next steps in your screenwriting process.
For notes on the full script:
  • Click the UPGRADE ME box on the Submission Form below.
  • Select the relevant UPGRADE FORMAT on the payment page. 
  • Scripts upgraded to notes include the Competition Registration Fee and will automatically be submitted for the competition.
Upgraded Notes include:
  • Story notes within the margins of the script.
  • An overall conclusion + next steps to develop and revise your screenplay.
  • Notes will be returned on or before May 19th.

NOTES UPGRADE FEE

1/2 hr TV

Up to 30 pages
$99

1 hR TV

Up to 60 pages
$199

FEATURES

Up to 120 pages
$299
Note: If your script exceeds the standard page count, TPP will review only up to the standard limit.
What are the deadlines?
  • Early Bird Deadline: March 24th
  • Regular Deadline: April 1st
  • Finalists Announced/Feedback Returned: May 12th
  • Winner Announced: May 19th
  • Finalist Workshop: May 29th​
What are the submission requirements?
Accepted Script Formats:
  • Features
  • TV pilots
  • We are NOT accepting Shorts in this competition.

Accepted Page Count:
  • Competition: Submit only the first 15 pages of your script, excluding the title page. Submissions exceeding 15 pages will automatically be disqualified.
  • Notes Upgrade: If your script exceeds the standard page count, TPP will review only up to the standard limit.
    • Features: Page count max: 120 pages.
    • TV:
      • 1hr: 60 pages
      • 1/2hr Single-Camera: 30 pages
      • 1/2hr Multi-Camera: 45 pages
Accepted File Format:
  • .pdf only
  • Any other file formats will automatically be disqualified.


Screenplay Formats

SHORT

UP TO 20 PAGES

A screenplay intended to be produced as an original motion picture with a running time less than a feature film. This includes trailers and proofs of concepts.

TELEVISION

UP TO 60 PAGES

A script intended for television, ie. a teleplay. This includes pilots, spec episodes of an established series, and web series.

FEATURE

UP TO 120 PAGES

A screenplay intended to be produced as an original motion picture.

Television Formats

ONE-HOUR

Up to 60 PAGES

​Usually dramas told in 4-6 act structure. Think GAME OF THRONES or LAW & ORDER SVU.

1/2HR SINGLE-CAMERA

(UP TO 30 PAGES)

A series shot like a film on one camera. These shows have more freedom in location than 1/2hr multi-camera shows and are written in 3 acts. Think INSECURE or MODERN FAMILY.

1/2HR MULTI-CAMERA

(UP TO 45 PAGES)

Set on a soundstage with limited sets, produced in whole like a play in front of a studio audience with multiple cameras and are written in 2 acts. Think MARTIN or FRIENDS.
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What do the
SCRIPT RECOMMENDATIONS Mean?

Script recommendations are evaluations that help writers understand the level of development their script requires to meet industry standards and enhance its overall quality.
Development Notes Pass Recommendation at The Professional Pen

PASS

An executive is likely to pass on the script due to the story being unclear, weak structure, and/or lack of proofreading and industry-standard formatting. 
Development Notes Needs Development Recommendation at The Professional Pen

NEEDS DEVELOPMENT

An executive may choose to continue the read if the writer addresses the action items disclosed in the feedback.
Development Notes Consider Recommendation at The Professional Pen

CONSIDER

An executive will likely continue the read because the story is clear, the structure is strong, and the proofreading and formatting is professional and up to industry standard.

Competition Submission CLOSED

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    SCRIPT INFO

    Complete this sentence. My project is in the vein of ______ (insert film or TV show).

    UPGRADE TO NOTES ON FULL SCRIPT


    UPLOAD SCRIPT

    • Competition: Submit only the first 15 pages of your script, excluding the title page. Submissions exceeding 15 pages will automatically be disqualified.
    • Notes Upgrade: If your script exceeds the standard page count, TPP will review only up to the standard limit.
    • File Type: Scripts not submitted as .pdf's will automatically be disqualified.
    Max file size: 20MB

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